Persuasive Writing.

Walt use the correct structure and language for persuasive writing.

We should play sport every day.

I think we should play sport every day.

Firstly I think we should play sport every day
because we get fit by running around.

Secondly I think we should play sport every day
because we make a team.

Another reason why I think we should play sport
every day is because we learn rugby skills.

So that’s why I  think we should play sport every day

Tornadoes

Today we were learning about tornadoes.

Scrach Jr.

WALT code our person to move.

Recount Writing

On Saturday morning me, my mum and dad went to the Christmas Parade in Kaikohe.

At the Christmas Parade I saw a float from Tonga. It had flags from Tonga. I  cheered when I to watch

had Tonga get a star for performing a dance. After that I was tired so we went home and I had I had a water fight out on our street with my 2 brothers. Splash! My brother got me with his water gun. I threw a water balloon at him but it missed him and popped on the road.

I had fun. It was cool.

In the weekend

   Me and my sis morning woke early in the morning mother’s day to make breakfast in bed  we first had pancakes eggs and bacon on a plate and her card to. and cleaned the house next and then my sister  went back to bed and I played the game and then my mum called out to me to get her plate so I paused the last game and went to get  her plate and wash it and then dried it. and then went to play the game. after the game I put on a movie and had popcorn and fish and chips     

WALT make our story make more sound better

                          here is my goal setting for term two  in our writing and

brushing teeth

WALT to use the correct structure and language for Persuasive Writing.

Brushing teeth. Teeth do a very important job for our body. So I think we should brush our teeth every day. Firstly I think we should brush our teeth every day so they are healthy and strong. When you brush your teeth you are brushing the bacteria away so the bacteria won’t damage your teeth. Secondly I think we should brush our teeth every day so our mouth has a good smell. By brushing your teeth you are cleaning out all the rotten food so your mouth is nice and clean. Thirdly I think we should brush our teeth every day so that we are protecting our teeth. When you brush your teeth you are brushing away the bacteria and the leftover food in your mouth so that helps to keep our teeth safe. So that’s why I think we should brush our teeth every day.